Class Pet – Jocelyn Gray
Intriguing concept, with the sexual scenes well written and the submissive psychology sufficiently conveyed.
4 Stars
The Student Learning Initiative – Shay Sands
Mind control erotica, great concept, with a dynamic, flowing storyline. The sex and submission scenes are beautifully and sexily rendered, with the femdom scenes taking it to another level.
5 Stars
Professor Gone Wild – Shay Sands
A different perspective on the first, with a confident female professor reduced to slutty subby bimbo by the self-aware computer programme. But there’s a real, gripping sci-fi adventure here too, and as adroitly realised as the sex scenes.
4.5 Stars
Anything for Amy – Shay Sands
Striking first-person narrative from a detached and almost robotic voice, fully believable as coming from someone unaware of the way their behaviour was being altered. Is the most effective of the series from a speculative viewpoint, but still retains the eroticism.
4 Stars
Amy’s Revenge – Shay Sands
Builds strongly upon a fascinating concept and gripping storyline, while simultaneously delivering red-hot erotica and femdom, and showing self-pleasure as something beautiful too.
4.5 Stars
Duel of the Campus Dommes – Shay Sands
Delivers comedy, thrills, a compelling final showdown, and one of the biggest group sex scenes ever written.
4 Stars
Her Boss – Amanda Carver
Hypno femdom erotica, chosen for having a subject named Jason. Great understanding of the dynamic, a really powerful subjugation of a deserving victim, and so exciting having a character with my own name on the receiving end.
4 Stars
The Power to Persuade – Amanda Carver
Beautifully written, in suitably mesmerising prose, although this domme uses scents and sensuality to completely ensnare and enslave her prey. Seeing it presented in first person from the victim’s point of view makes it all the more compelling.
5 Stars
Daring Cruelty – Jocelyn Gray
Deploys an unusual narrative technique, more tell than show, and made all the more compelling and penetrating by being written in the second person, being put in the position of the victim, being torn between envy and pity of him as he is dragged further into enslavement by the deliciously devious domme.
5 Stars
Brainwashed: Her Sissy Maid – Keary Hayes
Hard femdom with a heart of gold, this makes you want to follow the subject through their journey, and with the irresistibly hypnotic tone of the narrative, it feels very much like you are.
5 Stars
He Will Obey – edited by Jay Willowbay
It would be poor form to review my own story, but there are 20 others here, all of which had a profound, electrifying effect on me. The most impressive thing is cow convincingly and accurately some female authors can write from a male POV.
5 Stars
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